I have much love for this community. It's one of the friendliest I've encountered. Until last year, I was a pure internet lurker. I never logged into anything much less commented. Now i try to be supportive (unless I'm too busy being lazy) of the people keep fandoms alive.

I am never happy with how my smut scans but I think yours was bang on. Smut is hard to write. Real sex involves a lot of repetive behavior.

"He thrust himself deep inside, again and again. And again, and again and again and again and then Vince got a cramp and moved his leg and then Howard thrust again and again and again.." I might edit this bit before putting it in a story. Mainly, I plan to make it longer and more repetitive.