Many thanks - you give awesome feedback and you've picked up on some little things that I liked but I thought would probably go unnoticed amid all that chocolate and sex.
And I am particularly glad that the humour works. I love funny dialogue but find it quite hard to write, even though these two provide such a lot of scope for it!
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Date: 2012-03-25 01:40 pm (UTC)And I am particularly glad that the humour works. I love funny dialogue but find it quite hard to write, even though these two provide such a lot of scope for it!