Just Enough (Part 1/?)

[directmydesire.livejournal.com]

Title: Just Enough (Part 1/?)
Author: Sely directmydesire
Pairing or Characters: Noel/Julian & Mike plays the part of *gasp* Noel’s kid brother!
Summary: RPS + AU Julian is a rich & powerful business man and Noel’s selling himself on the streets
Word Count: 2,534
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Smut, Angst, & probably a bit of eventual violence
Disclaimer: I (sadly) own neither Noel, Julian or Mike and am merely using their appearances to add some gorgeousness to my fic. None of the events in this story actually occurred and I’m making no profit from this story.
Author’s Notes: In case it’s not clear Julian, Noel & Mike are 30, 20, & 12 respectively. I’m a fairly new Boosh fan, and this is my very first fic using the Boosh Boys so please be gentle. I’m also American so do forgive the occasional Americanism that might slip in and also forgive any inaccuracy about London (which I’ve never been to) and the price of a prostitute cause I wouldn’t know the price of an American one much less one in London so I just wrote something that looked okay. Thanks goes out to the ladies Here for finally breaking my writer's block and for inspiring this fic with This Pic 

Also, if the response is good for this part, I’ll definitely continue (as I already have this massive plot in my head) and if I do, I’ll be on the look out for a lovely Beta. So if anyone would like to help with that, I’d appreciate it! Hope you enjoy!

Just Enough Part 1

Comments

[bellemortex.livejournal.com]

Wow that was really good. As a fellow American Booshy, I tip my hat to you. And I beg of you to write more soon. I really want to see where this tale is headed!!!

[directmydesire.livejournal.com]

Thanks so much! I'm really glad you like it! I definitely think there's more to come. I've had such mad writers block lately and all of a sudden this bout of inspiration, well I just dont think I can keep my pen still. :D

[gracefulstalker.livejournal.com]

I have to admit, I was hesitant, but I really really enjoyed it! Hope you continue! Just to say that you have "hits" where you mean to have "hips" here. "when he sees pale shoulders and hits" I think there was something else somewhere but I can't remember. I can beta the next one if you want?

[directmydesire.livejournal.com]

Oops! All fixed now thanks, I try to catch all those little things but after I've read through it a couple times my mind starts reading what I know is supposed to be there rather than what actually is. Lol! And it'd be lovely to have you as a Beta for the next bit. I dont know when that'll be done, but I'll let you know for sure. :)

Also I'm really glad you're enjoying it! I know it's sort of an odd scenario but I do hope people keep giving it a chance. Thanks again!

[gothimp.livejournal.com]

You had me at “Your mouth. How much?”
That was yummy scrummy.
More please?

[directmydesire.livejournal.com]

You have no idea how much I agonized over whether I should keep that line in! Had not idea if ppl would think it was as hott as I thought it was, but I'm really glad it worked for you & there's definitely more on the way.

[fecklesslyfine.livejournal.com]

I will follow you to the ends of the earth for writing this, haha. I think I must have a thing for rentboy fic. Basically, I am super intrigued and I like your characterizations quite a lot as well.

Plus, Mike was just friggin' adorable. It's a nice move, balancing porn with childlike adorability. Combining them, not so much, but balancing, yes :D

Looking forward to the next bit!

[directmydesire.livejournal.com]

Thanks so much! I'm really glad you enjoyed it and happy that you thought it worked out.

In the very begining it was supposed to end right after Noel got out of the car, but then the plot sorta grew and I added on that last part as a lead in to future events. I was worried that the shift would be akward.

But yeah, Mike is definitely meant to bring the cute! More on the way soon hopefully.

[ibkod.livejournal.com]

You have a couple mistakes, just a few spelling mistakes and you overuse Julian's name in the first paragraph or two, but you know what, I liked it so much that I didn't even mind the mistakes.

Something that has NEVER happened before.

[directmydesire.livejournal.com]

Wow, that really is a very lovely compliment! Thanks a ton!

I'll definitely take the advice about using Ju's name too much into consideration when I'm writing the rest!

Really glad you enjoyed it and thanks for commenting!

[acestar.livejournal.com]

Oh please carry this on!

I like a bit of AU first thing in the morning, and this one definitely didn't disappoint :) You've got some amazing descriptions in there, and caught the characters well :) I reckon using a beta will help get this set as a great fic!

Looking forward to the next part! :D

[directmydesire.livejournal.com]

Thanks you! Really glad you're enjoying it & I'm glad your diggin my characterization!

More is definitely on the way! :)

[unbelievable2.livejournal.com]

Great storyline, atmospheric writing and .....hot!! Really enjoyed this. Intrigued by it all and will look forward to developments!

[directmydesire.livejournal.com]

Thanks so much for the lovely compliments & Thanks for commenting! Hoping to finish writing the 2nd part today, so hopefully it'll be up before too long! :)